Heyy!! It's pretty cool. Very interesting. Your first entry, Riven as a four year old, you did a good job with the reference to drugs and the affair situation, but it doesn't sound like a four year old's writing.
Also, a child dealing with this kind of domestic behavior should have a number of different feelings. Confusion you covered, but what about sadness, longing for things to be different.
Anyway, good job! I like it
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Can't wait for the next entry.