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Nightworld, My very first original story. Horror-based, so be warned. 16+ |
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Apr 26 2010, 4:14 PM
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Cosmix Fairy
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PrologueThere ya go, the prologue my first non-fanfiction work. It basically follows the adventures of Private Detective Ian Cole as he's introduced to 'Nightworld', a world filled with vampires, werewolves, demons, you name it. I'm really, really sorry for the name of the city. I wanted something with 'Hell', but most American towns I know don't have that in their name. Holland, on the other hand.... my school's located in a large city, basically called 'Hell's mouth' if you translate it. (BTW; Hellepoort basically means 'Hell's gate'). This doesn't mean the place is Dutch. I try my best to place it in the U.S..... but considering I'll probably make some screwups at some point considering law, geography, culture and whatnot and use Dutch mannerisms, I'll keep it ambiguous. Anyway, enough ranting about something so minimal. I hope this prologue is enjoyable.....
This post has been edited by P-girl: Apr 26 2010, 4:14 PM
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May 8 2010, 5:23 PM
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Cosmix Fairy
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Sorry for the double post, but... New chapter! Chapter 1: Exposition, do your duty!Yeah, not the actual title (I prefer not to use chapter titles) but it felt appropriate. While satisfied, this chapter felt a bit clunky and is largely expositional.... still, it's kinda bad when you keep relating something to a catch-phrase of an internet show called 'Bad Movie Beatdown'. But then again, it's a bit of a gateway chapter to the story. And it's one of those chapters every 'Person discovers Underworld type of thing is actually real' kinda has. Oh well, it's not 'I know what you are.... Say it.... *Dramatic zoom* Vampire' At least I hope it's not. /Senseless babbling. Hope it's enjoyable.
This post has been edited by P-girl: May 8 2010, 5:23 PM
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