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Well, it's not so much an ode, but this is a haiku I wrote. I dedicate it to all The Men of the world. But what can I say? I was inspired by an ARK I hadn't seen til now. And after I wrote my reply to said ark, made about The Man himself I wrote these.
How I love The Man All his dog-like tendancies Man is Donnan? Non.
Or perhaps an acrostic poem?
Tiresome Helpless(in getting underailed that is) Ew
Manleh man Animalistic Not Donnan.
Cinquain next? Donnan He is The Man He is an animal Addicted, loves to bite people The Man ((I slid right by with that one in terms of MCness, I'm telling ya))
Or even a limerick perhaps?
There once was a Man called The Man Who was not at all like Donnan He wasn't a pal But an animal And was disliked by all but his nan.
Yeaaaahh. Just MAKE it rhyme. It still sounds rightish. ((To be clear. I dislike the characterisation. Not the character by any length. Mofcourse though.))
....You can all go home now. I don't have any more poetry to spout.
This post has been edited by W.I.N.X: Nov 15 2010, 10:38 AM
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I havent read many haikus in my life but i can say this is really good, as a poetry writer myself =D though i only do wen im feeling sad....=P If u write a lot of these u should find a website to upload them or something cuz u did a great job XD