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Ranma
post May 2 2010, 7:21 PM
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((I'll consider it. But for now I'd like to write in this style. I'll try to find a good way to pace the story. Maybe I'll make it less like an episode and more like a novel. That might help.))

-I had a great teacher in college. I wrote two movie length scripts and I'm working on a script right now for a game I'm working on. I'm good at them, but I'd like to try something new.-

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post May 2 2010, 8:34 PM
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Well, good luck to you on that. And I'll be here if you ever need any advice or just someone to bounce ideas or chapters off of.


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post May 4 2010, 11:58 PM
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Thanks, I really appreciate it. ^_^


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post Jan 1 2012, 4:06 PM
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Loving this story! Please continue!
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post Jan 18 2012, 3:35 AM
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((For those who actually follow this story. I proof read the last chapter I released and I changed a little bit with Krystal towards the end. I kind of took Morrigan's advice and tried to find a way to make her appearance at the end of the story feel more natural. I'm going to be coming out with a new chapter soon. I'll probably proof read and correct one of my old chapters every time I'm about to come out with a new chapter... Yeah, that's about all I want to say... ^_^))

EDIT: ((Just proof read chapters 1 and 2. I guess I'll proof read the story first after all.))

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post Jan 22 2012, 8:56 PM
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Hello! I've just finished critiquing Dreamer. I send it to you in a message, I hope that's alright. ^^
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post Jan 22 2012, 9:07 PM
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That's just fine. Did you read it before or after the proof read?


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post Jan 22 2012, 10:19 PM
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Did you edit it on the 19th? If so, then I read it afterwards.
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post Jan 22 2012, 11:06 PM
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((On the twentieth.))


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