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rano0oma
post Oct 22 2009, 2:08 PM
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so........
my teacher just gave us our first essay assignment and i really have no idea what to write since it's about education and i hate education!!!!
it's due this saturday and it's already Thursday so i need help fast!!!


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post Oct 22 2009, 2:34 PM
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what is it exactly about education? maybe you should look smth. out in wikipedia, i always write my essays by that


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post Oct 22 2009, 2:40 PM
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ok thnx i'll check it out


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post Oct 22 2009, 2:47 PM
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ok so i just checked wiki. and it didn't help!!


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post Oct 22 2009, 3:15 PM
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what exactly do you need? the ways of education, or the basic meaning and history of the education, or anything else?


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post Oct 22 2009, 3:25 PM
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well an essay style tends to be introduction, then a paragraph a point and a conclusion at the end


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post Oct 22 2009, 3:33 PM
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well i don't really know what i want to write it's my first time!!


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post Oct 22 2009, 3:41 PM
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ok, lets think it's about history and basics of education.
you should start with history of it, write all importand moments, dates and people. you have to use many difficuld words, and much of them! by that you're getting more text, and more impression as a good writer, which leads to a good mark.
after, i think, you should write about the nowdays style of education, and again-people, dates, difficult words etc.
And, to conclude, you should remember smth. about the future of education, some references etc.
the problem is i don't know how much words you should write, but i think you'll get it yourself. just remember about using much difficult words and phrases, this is really helpful.

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post Oct 22 2009, 3:42 PM
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Can you be more specific about your topic? I could try to help, then. ^^


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post Oct 22 2009, 4:03 PM
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well i have to write what is education and what is it's affect on society...


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post Oct 22 2009, 4:50 PM
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Well, you could start with a general introduction on what education is; I think you could easily find that info online... Then you could go on to say why we need education in today's world, and discuss a few negative and a few positive effects of educations. How many words is your essay supposed to be?


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post Oct 23 2009, 9:40 AM
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120 words


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post Oct 23 2009, 4:02 PM
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Oh, then if you follow what I said, I think you'll have more than enough material. 120 words is a really short piece.


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post Oct 23 2009, 5:51 PM
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i think, a few references to important people in that area, would also be useful.


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post Oct 24 2009, 12:29 PM
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yeah thnx guys i managed to buy some more time from my teacher with fake tears and stuff i think i pulled it off nicely hahahha!!~ (am sneaky!! ;D )


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post Oct 24 2009, 1:21 PM
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Lol, glad you got an extension, but I think you should just sit down and get the assignment over with. 120 words is really not that hard to write; try it, you'll see. {In fact, that sentence you wrote in your last post was 28 words long. If you just write about four sentences of that length, you'll be at almost 120 words. So don't stress over this, I'm sure you can pull it off.}

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post Oct 24 2009, 7:56 PM
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am half way there so thnx for your support!!


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post Oct 25 2009, 5:37 AM
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No problem. ^^


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