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post Jan 25 2010, 5:03 AM
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post Jan 25 2010, 10:12 AM
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oh awesome... please continue!!


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post Jan 25 2010, 8:17 PM
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Tea likes, very much. Keep writing Shani!


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post Jan 26 2010, 5:53 AM
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Sounds interesting! O:


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post Jan 28 2010, 12:18 AM
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post Jan 29 2010, 7:14 AM
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Aww, sweet but sad D:


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post Feb 1 2010, 8:18 AM
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dont worry it gets better, or so how i've planned it. :3 keep reading and find out.


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post Feb 1 2010, 11:52 PM
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Omg, still loving it!


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post Feb 3 2010, 1:50 AM
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Awww so sweet. I can feel for the two of them. Good job! You win my stamp of awesomness. :) Be happy.


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post Feb 3 2010, 8:40 AM
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post Feb 3 2010, 6:58 PM
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She just can't get a moment of peace, can she?

Out of curiosity, what's the setting for this? Namely, country and time period.


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post Feb 4 2010, 12:54 AM
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I love it! Jules and Charlotte are so cute!


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post Feb 5 2010, 7:54 AM
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Morny. lol basically its nowadays and the country im not completly sure of but i guess its Australia. :3


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post Feb 15 2010, 9:05 AM
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post Apr 23 2010, 10:06 AM
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Adorable <3 , makes me smile icon_biggrin.gif i love it continiue plz


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post Apr 24 2010, 2:14 PM
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Well, I went through this and to be honest I think a few things could have been cleared up a bit better, like how the narrator can somehow switch to two people and who she was interacting with. Really, just a bit more exposition and clarification for certain things. The story so far, what I could gather from it, was pretty colorful and quirky, and that's always nice to see.


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post Apr 26 2010, 11:58 PM
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thanks for the criticism although The "narrator" is actualy the protagonist. Also this is the rough copy. I have cleaned up many things, edited, cut out, changed, you name it! Anywho i have made edits in the hope to someday complete it and perhaps turn it into a novel?

Anywho im not going to post the newer version here. Maybe in a new topic or my blog or something. I also have to ask to any who can 9without going overboard of course) please give me some contructive criticism and new ideas ect. Im always welcome to some change!
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post Jul 21 2010, 11:09 AM
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I'm only posting to day im sad.. i think i may have delted the edited and primmed first chapter of this story which took me months!!! >.< im looking kneee deep to find it!!!

i also plan to continue it for those interested, maybe someday send it to an editor.


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post Oct 13 2010, 2:46 PM
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hey, I love your story so far!! :)
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