I haven't watched it in a while, and I mostly saw Tokyo Mew Mew, but I do know about Mew Mew Power and can help you with those parts.
How beta reading goes is that you write out the chapter like you normally would. When you're done, you send it to your beta reader (in this case, P-girl or I) and they correct spelling and grammar mistakes. Sometimes they'll also help you with parts of the story or character actions. When they're done, they send it back to you. You take the revised version, make sure you like it, maybe even send it in for beta reading again if you decide to make changes, THEN post it.
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RIP Falicia (AngelDarkstorm, Anime-Princess) :: 01/19/1990 - 05/25/2013 :: I love you, Sisser."I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying." ~Oscar Wilde
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