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Jun 25 2010, 6:43 PM
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Sirenix Fairy
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All my post seems to be a Fail, but lets try this....
OK there was the only "Forum Game" I've really into, it was the choose your path series back in other site that have an early end years ago, i thought it would be interesting to try it in here... it seems to work better with a mysterious theme, but remember, the story can become anything depending of the people choices. So, good Writers, can make it awesome... lets see if we can make it work
The Game rules are easy, read the story, choose one of the given options, write what happen after the decision was taken (more than a line, a small paragraph will be great) and then give the next player other set of options to choose. Everything is valid, just try not to spin it 180 degrees on one post... except if you got a good plot twist... Each 5 or 10 post if you want, you can insert a chapter name, this really only works to suggest the next players how the story will continue or what could happen.
Example: Poster1: see a door and the window (a) open the door (b) look through the window Poster2: (b) you see through the window and see someone running to the door (a)shout to him to get his attention (b) run away from the door Poster3: (a) .....
i'll start...
Chapter One: The Darkness Inside Your Mind.
In the middle of the deep silence of the night a very loud sound awakes you, it was something like two rusty metal pieces strongly clashing against eachothers. You open your eyes and realizes that you are lying down in a strange place... you don't seems to remember who you are, where you are, or why are you here. You are cold, and your clothes are wet with some kind of dirty water, and for some reason you got some numbers written on the palm of your left hand. you take a look around the small and dark room you are in, trying to look for something that connect with you, but you fail to see anything familiar. The celling of the room is full of small pipelines that run from one wall to the other, some of them have little leaks that get all the room and yourself wet, in the floor there is a lot of little puddles stored on the irregularities of the floor, one of them have something inside that looks like a dead rat, in your opposite corner you can see under the light of the small window on the top of the wall, the remains of what seems to be a wooden book shelf that is now trashed by the water that kept falling upon it, next to it there is a old poster written on a language that you don't understand, and in the wall in at your right there is an old Rusty metal Door, the lock on the Door seems to be broken, so you may open it if you push it very strongly.... You feel a little dizzy and tired, but you manage to stand up grabbing from the cold and wet wall, as you get closer to the door you hear distant voices from the other side... but... are they saying actually words? who's voices are those? are they friends or foes? Did you get lost? Are you a Prisoner?..... What Should you Do? You can:
(a) Try to Open the Door Sneakily and go out slowly to see what's outside. (b) Hit the Door and Scream to see if someone come to let you Out (c ) Try to climb up on the remains of the Book self to try to see through the window and figure it out where you really are. (d) Open the Door violently and Run as fast as you can.
This post has been edited by DeadInside: Jun 25 2010, 6:44 PM
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Jun 25 2010, 8:32 PM
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Sirenix Fairy
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(B) You scream and one of the men out side turn around immediately.. when he see you he just go panic and start yelling to the other man.. you dont understand whats he saying, but he hears very angry, he just grab the other man by the shirt-neck and start shaking him as he yells at him, after that the two man run away from your sight...
What just happen? you dont have any clue... but you can hear them go far from the window. As you try to get off the bookshelf it breaks down and you fall, you are not injured, but the bookshelf is useless... As you approach to the door you hear the both loud man coming closer to you... but you still dont know if they are coming to help you or hurt you, fearing the worst you pick up a piece of wood from the self...
Now, you can... (a) charge the door, stick in hand and see what happen (b) wait by the door and smack the first person that comes in with the stick, then try to run away (c ) wait peaceful inside to see who these people are.. stic in hand just in case (d) Go back to the corner you were and fake that you are still asleep
This post has been edited by DeadInside: Jun 25 2010, 8:34 PM
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Jun 26 2010, 5:44 AM
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Sirenix Fairy
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(c ) You stay quiet... waiting him to go away... 10 maybe 20 seconds pass and silence.... just silence... you can hear your heart beat getting faster and faster and then.. again the knock in the door... you start getting desperate and then the lock moves and the door opens up slowly, letting in a bright of light from a lamp outside, you get temporally blind because of the light change and when you see clearly there is a man right in front of you, moving his hand very fast toward your head, you try to scream but he put his dirty hand over your mount! and says in signs "Silence", then point to the door... Is he there to save you? is one of the men you see through the window?
You can (a) smack him with the stick to let you go, then run away to the already open door and do not look back (b) Relax and throw the stick and see what he wants (c ) Relax and say yes with your head and when he let you go, then smack him with the stick (d) smack him with the stick to let you go run out, then close the door... then do the talking
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Jun 26 2010, 7:58 AM
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Sirenix Fairy
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(B) You run as fast as you can and enter on the room, but the guards notices you on the run... you manage to get inside before the guards and the people behind you reach you, before even taking a good look at the room you are now, you close the door behind you and block it with a chair... You take a moment to get your breath back when you notices that you are trapped, the room seems to be a small storage with nothing but boxes filled with ruined papers and books, you see a ventilation far up on the celling, and the wall on the left seems to be made of wood... before you could even think what to do you hear the men outside smashing the door and yelling at you things that you don't understand... even when you are pretty sure that you hear a man say "He's broken free!" in clear english when you were in the run... suddenly in the middle of the noises outside you hear that voice again saying "the failed one is inside the storage" but... what does he mean? you can:
(a) try to talk from inside with the only person that you understand (b) try to pile all the stuff inside to see if you can get the ventilation (c ) charge the wooden wall hoping that you can pass through it (d) surrender to the men outside
((((the last thing i want is boss anyone, but please read the other post before you write to avoid incoherences, after the chapter change (post 10 maybe if it last that much lol) it would be post all the old post in one spoiler box to make them easy for newer people. thank you))))
This post has been edited by DeadInside: Jun 26 2010, 8:12 AM
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Jun 27 2010, 11:18 AM
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Sirenix Fairy
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(c ) You figure it out that whatever it is its going to keep trying until it get inside, do you took the poker and walk to the door... and at the moment you hear the sound again you open the door in a swift and swing your weapon as fast and hard you can, but you only hit the ground and lightly hurt your hand on the impact... You look amaze around to see what's going on, but see nothing... nothing at all, and then the noise again! As you turn you see an old branch moving by the wind poking the wall close to the door.. you feel relieve for a moment, then remember the breath you hear.. and then, something move in the tall grass at your right! and at your left! you don't know what it is but is obvious that is more than one!! as you were about to enter the house again you hear movement inside... could one of those things be already inside? before you could even think what to do a roar from a close distant make chill your spine, a sound you never hear before... you just pick up the poke and...
You can (a) Wait outside, close the door behind you and prepare to fight (b) get inside and close the door.. and prepare to fight if there is one inside (c ) run as fast as you can away from the cabin (d) make a lot of noise to see if they go away
(((First on page 2, please copy paste all the previous story parts (without choices) in a spoiler box as chapter one, and choose a name for chapter 2. thanks))))
This post has been edited by DeadInside: Jun 27 2010, 11:22 AM
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