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[John]

Prelogue

Long ago before time flowed and space existed there was nothing.
Suddenly a huge explosion took place and a being was born, the being created two great gods who started the flow of time and space.
The two gods also created the time staff along with the space staff which are said to have power over time and space.
The two gods created three goddesses who created numerous planets along with universes.
Azia, one of the goddesses created a great dragon who created the magical dimensions before going to Planet Sparx to serve an eternal sleep before his power broke up in to three mystical fires known as the Pheonix fire, the shadow fire, and the dragon fire.
The three goddesses sealed their power in to a artifact called the Triforce which split in to three pieces.
A evil dragon was born and created a evil place which is later known as the Under realm along with it's evilest place which is later known as Shadow Haunt.
The evil dragon went across the multi verse causing chaos when two brave warriors took the time and space staffs and used the staff's power to banish the evil dragon to the dark dimension.
Could anyone be foolish enough to attempt to steal the great god's power ?

That's the end of the prologue.

[P-girl]

I'd wager you'd be a good fanfiction writer.

Not bad, not bad at all. Please write more.

[John]

Some people don't appreciate my fanfiction anyway I'm working on Chapter 1.

[P-girl]

What do you mean? I really think it's good.....

[John]

Chapter 1 is almost here

Does that mean that I'm not really good with RPs but good with this ?
Anyway, here's Chapter 1 !

Chapter 1: It all begins !

Thousands of years later, a covent of witches came to Planet Sparx. and used their black magic to freeze the planet, they flew through the halls of the palace when they encounted Orientel and Mirriam who blasted them with all their magic,a baby was delivered to Earth.

17 years after that incident on Sparx., A group of people are going on a space ship.
"15 hours and 34 minutes and 50 seconds to our destination" someone said.
"It's only a matter of time before I'm crowned emperor of the multi verse" a masked man says.
Later, the space ship lands on Planet Azia which was named after one of the goddesses.
"We have now reached Planet Azia" the computer says.
The masked man steps out of the space ship.
"There should be a piece of the Triforce on this planet" the masked man says.
The group of people start drilling through the rock and eventually break through in to a hidden cavern.
"The first part of the Triforce should be down there" The masked man says.
The masked man along with a group of people lower themselves in to the cavern.
"The first piece of the Triforce should be through that passageway" the masked man says.
Suddenly guard trolls come out.
"This should be easy" the masked man says.
Suddenly the masked man uses his magic to destroy the trolls.
"What a pathetic security system" the masked man said.
The masked man walks through the passageway and notices a door at the end of it.
"a lock" the masked man said.
Suddenly a whole load of lasers suddenly start firing at the door knocking it down.
"I don't know why someone would put a door down here but there it is" the masked man says.
The masked man looks at the first piece of the Triforce floating on it's platform.
"Here's the first part of the Triforce" the masked man says.
The masked man picks up the first piece of the Triforce and backtracks through tha passageway.
"That was as easy as stealing candy from a pixie" the masked man says.
The masked man backtracks out of the cavern and goes back on to his space ship.
"One down, two to go" the masked man says and the space ship takes off heading for it's next destination.

End of chapter 1.

[John]

I need you to post before doing anymore chapters.

[Kazzu]

Awesome. Pls write more

[John]

Good enough for now !
This chapter may be a little shorter than chapter one but if I included what happens in the cavern in this chapter then this chapter would be too long.

Chapter 2: The Encounter

The space ship flies past Planet Sparx.
"20 hours, 56 minutes, and 23 seconds till our destination" the computer said.

Later the spaceship lands on Planet Malena which is named after another goddess.
"I will now get the next piece of the Triforce" the masked man says.
So the masked man walks up to the lake when a gigantic Malena-quake is felt.
"What going on here" the masked man asked.
Suddenly the kraken leaps up in to the air.
"This won't be as easy as beating mere guard trolls" the masked man said.
"We'll take care of Kraken" the masked man's assistant said.
Suddenly loads of laser starts firing at Kraken and the masked man fires a beam of magic at Kraken defeating it.
"Now Kraken's wave of terror is over" the masked man said.
The masked man went in to his space ship.
"Now it's safe to go over the waters without being attacked" the masked man said.
Suddenly the space ship takes off again and lands in a little island in the lake.
"Where is the entrance to the island cavern" the masked man asked.
The lasers started to fire at the stone structure
Then a rather large stone fell from the gigantic stone structure revealing the entrace to the island cavern where the second piece of the Triforce rests.
"Now to get the second piece of the Triforce" the masked man said.
The masked man enters the cavern.

Will the masked man succeed in getting the second piece of the Triforce ?
Come back next time to find out.

This post has been edited by John: Aug 10 2007, 5:27 AM

[John]

I'll wait for your replies for now.

[mimi_x3]

ahh its very good john im very impressed can you please continue

[John]

Thanks !

Chapter 3: The Protector

The masked man walks along the hall when someone comes out in front of him.
"Stop this now !" the mysterious person says.
"not until the power is mine" the masked man shouts.
Suddenly the masked man fires a beam of magical energy at the mysterious person but the person jumps to avoid being hit, so the beam knocks down a door.
"the second piece of the Triforce" the masked man says.
"your not getting it" the mysterious person said.
The masked man walks in to the chamber and takes the second piece of the Triforce.
"I just got it" the masked man said.
"I will get it back" the mysterious person said.
"Seal this guy in this chamber" the masked man shouted and the masked man goes through the hall way and a beam is fired at the roof sealing the mysterious person in the chamber but the masked man gets out in time to save himself.
"Annoying meddling guy" the masked man said.
The masked man goes in to his space ship and it takes off to it's next destination.
Meanwhile on Planet Malena, another space ship lands on the planet's surface and a group off people rescue the mysterious person.
Meanwhile in the space ship.
"two down, one to go" the masked man says and starts laughing.
The spaceship flies past a planet.
Who is this mysterious person and will he succeed in stopping the masked man's diabolical plans (which haven't been released yet) ?

End of chapter 4.

This post has been edited by John: Aug 11 2007, 10:51 AM

[John]

Most of the mistakes in chapter 3 should be fixed now.

Chapter 4: The Power

Far away there is a group of people.
"He's going to get all three pieces of the Triforce if we don't stop him since so far he's gotten two pieces of the Triforce so he's probably going for the third and final piece" The mysterious person said.
"Then lets move out to Planet Filena" a lady says.
"Fine" the mysterious person says.
Meanwhile on the masked man's space ship.
"the power of the gods shall soon be mine" the masked man said.
"23 hours, 47 minutes and 39 seconds till our destination" the computer says.
Later the space ship lands on Planet Filena and the masked man walks to the shrine.
"the goddess Filena's shrine ?"the masked man says.
The masked man walks closer to it and hold out the other two pieces of the Triforce.
"Open" the masked man says and suddenly the shrine dissapears leaving a pathway that leads underground.
The masked man walks along the pathway when the mysterious person appears.
"How did you get out of the chamber ?" the masked man asks.
"Quite simple actually" the mysterious person says.
The masked man walks up to a door.
"What's with these doors popping up all the time" the masked man says and blasts the door knocking it down with a powerful beam.
The masked man walks in to the Triforce chamber.
"The third and final piece of the Triforce" the masked man says.
"You will not get it" the mysterious person says creating a orb of energy.
The masked man goes to the third piece of the Triforce and picks up.
"This shall be your end" the masked man says.
Suddenly the masked man puts all three pieces of the Triforce back together and a beam of magical energy zapped the roof of the chamber reducing it in to nothing and a beam of magical energy shoots out of the surface of the planet where the shrine used to be.
The mysterious person throws the orb at the masked man but it bounced of a force field generated by the Triforce.
The masked man starts to laugh.
The mysterious person gets hit by his own orb.
The masked man goes up through the hole in the chamber roof that was created by the beam of energy.
"This world shall tremble" the masked man says before going in to his space ship.
The space ship takes off to it's next destination.

End of chapter 4.

[Smurfje]

Wowh, it's good, I like it! ^^

Although, I don't fully understand it, I am sorry ^^ My English is very poor Could you please make me a quick summarie so I'll know I understood everything in the right way? ^^

[John]

The masked man has gone to three diferent planets stealing all three pieces of the Triforce which is the power of three goddesses.

[John]

Enjoy the latest chapter !
I'm not sure if this is my shortest chapter yet but the later ones will probably be way longer.

Chapter 5: The Plan

The space ship suddenly shot past a green and blue planet.
"23 hours, 43 minutes, and 54 seconds till your destination2 the computer said.
" It's only a matter of time" the masked man siad.

Later the masked man's space ship starts to descend in to a dark planet.
"At least I've got all three pieces of the Triforce" the masked man said.
A space ship sized door opened and the spaceship went through it.
"Now to over power all" the masked man said.
The spaceship landed and the masked man went in to his head quarters.
"Now to analyse the Triforce" the masked man said.
The masked man put the Triforce on to a machine.
"Once the machine finishes analysing the Triforce, I'll go to all the realms" the masked man said.
Later the machine finished scanning the Triforce and the masked man looked at the data.
"the Triforce is not enough" the masked man said.
The masked man walked out of the room.
"time to get all four pieces of the codex" the masked man said and he exited his head quarters and entered his space ship.
"When I get all four pieces of the codex along with a few special staffs, then my plan shall go in to action" the masked man said before starting to laugh.
The space ship left the head quarters and started to go through the planet's atmosphere before leaving the planet.
The space ship suddenly shot away from the planet to the it's next destination but little does the maske man know that someone is following his space ship once he passes a gold planet.
What is the masked man's destination, what does he need the codex for and what is his evil (or whatever sort of plan he has) plan and who is following the masked man ?
All these question may be answered next time so stay tuned.

End of chapter 5.

[Smurfje]

The masked man has gone to three diferent planets stealing all three pieces of the Triforce which is the power of three goddesses.

Thanks a lot! I get it now Please keep up the good work!

[John]

Thanks !

[John]

Chapter 6: The First Piece

The space ship shot past a planet.
"1 hour, 23 minutes, and 54 seconds till our destination" the computer said.
"This seems like a waste of time" a lady said.
"Not at all, all three pieces of the Triforce are on one planet meaning that I don't need to be travelling for three days just to get another piece" the masked man said.

Later the space ship heads towards a planet.
"Which piece should we get first" the masked man said.
"the easiest to get would be at red fountain" the computer said.
"Then go to the fountain that's red then" the masked man said.
"Red fountain is a heroic's school" the computer said.
"then while I'm there I'll try to get them to rename the school to something better than red fountain" the masked man said.
The space ship lands on top of red fountain.
"the name Alfea sounds worse then the name red fountain" the computer said.
The masked man steps out of the space ship.
The masked man zaps a hole in the roof with the Triforce and enters the buliding.
"This place's security system is pathetic" the masked man said.
A whole load of guards surrounded the masked man.
"Guards, How original" the masked man said.
The masked man zapped the guards.
"Guards were always easy to defeat" the masked man said before heading down the stairs.
The masked man heads in to a room.
"A weird scale thing" the masked man said.
The masked man fires a beam of energy from the Triforce to destroy the scales.
"This pathetic place's part of the codex shall be mine" the masked man said before heading down more stairs.
"The first piece of the codex" the masked man said before walking towards the codex.
The masked man takes the first piece of the codex before backtracking out of red fountain and back on to his space ship.
"That was easy" the masked man said.
"The closest place which has a codex piece is Alfea" the computer said.
"Alfea, what a weird name" the maske man said before laughing.
The space ship got of red fountain and shot towards Alfea.

End of chapter 6.

[John]

I'll wait for someone else to post.