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Kaylin
post Jan 2 2012, 10:37 PM
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Hello there! I just wanted to let everyone know that I am offering literature critiques for anyone who wants feedback on their writing. If you'd like me to read through your work and give you truthful feedback, let me know. I'd be more than happy to help. ^^

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P-girl
post Jan 2 2012, 11:37 PM
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Cool! You want to give some critique on my original fiction?

http://www.fictionpress.com/~paranoidgirl
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Kaylin
post Jan 3 2012, 8:23 PM
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Sure, I'll check it out ^^
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post Jan 3 2012, 8:29 PM
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Thank you!
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Ranma
post Jan 11 2012, 3:36 AM
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I wouldn't mind you reading my work. Just keep in mind that the first few chapters were typed without much proof reading. I was usually in class when I typed them. Anyway, I tried something new with this writing style and tried to make each chapter into an episode. So the pacing is a bit off in some places. I'm thinking about re-working the first few chapters once I get the time.

http://magixclub.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=1057


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Kaylin
post Jan 13 2012, 4:03 AM
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Awesome! I'll be sure to check it out (along with P-girl's) this weekend. ^^
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post Jan 22 2012, 3:07 PM
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Weekend's over..... a long time.
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Ranma
post Jan 22 2012, 5:31 PM
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Maybe something came up...


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Kaylin
post Jan 22 2012, 6:45 PM
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Something did come up, actually. I'm checking the stories out right now though, I'm so sorry for the long wait. ):

Edit: P-girl: fictionpress won't let me post the critique on their site, so I'll just PM it to you here. Hope that's alright. ^^

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post Jan 22 2012, 8:12 PM
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Sorry, sorry. Didn't want to come off as pushy.....
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Kaylin
post Jan 22 2012, 8:28 PM
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No, it's totally fine. Sorry again for getting around to these so late!
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post Feb 4 2012, 9:44 PM
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Whenever you're not busy or bored you could always check out a few of mine. I don't really have any in particular in mind, but the only one that isn't finished is "As Long as Love is Strong" and I'm having a hard time coming up with inspiration to finish it (I started it so long ago too, thats probably part of the problem). They are all posted on my fanfic.net account:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~lateeda18
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