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Chapter 2- The Letter
Haylie was writing a letter when she heard the doors to her mother‘s room open up. Haylie stopped writing and went out of the bedroom. Musa sat in the couch reading something.
-What are you reading? Haylie asked.
Musa looked up with tears in her eyes. Haylie noticed that these tears were different. They looked like happy tears. -A letter, a letter from your father. Musa said and smiled.
-You have one on the table. Musa continued and pointed.
Haylie frozed. –A- a letter? From dad?
Musa smiled. –Yes, a letter from Riven.
Haylie walked at the table and picked up the letter. It said Haylie on front of it. Plus her adress at Melody. At the back it said who the sender was. Riven it said. Plus his adress at Domino. Haylie wanted to scream of the happiness that just got up inside her. She could resist that but opened up the letter right away.
Dear Haylie,
I can‘t come home until after few more months. We are almost finished but we are still needing some details. I am so sorry I‘ve been here for so many years. I‘ve missed you and your mother so unbelieveable much. I could have come and visit you if all people tranport portal wouldn‘t have been closed for accident after everyone involving the repair of the planet came. But now it has been fixed and you can come and visit. The last time I saw you, you were so small. You are my own daughter, and I‘ve missed you growing up. I know I gave you a promise, I would never forget that. You probably don‘t remember it, but I do and I will keep it.
Riven
P.S. the reason I haven‘t had contact is a secret.
Haylie wondered what secret that was but she didn‘t care much because she could go and visit him. Musa on the other hand didn‘t get so cheerful letter. Haylie saw that as her mother locked herself in her room again and expired the letter. Haylie never knew what said in that letter.
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ooo... you won't get the secret yet... but Musa probably knows a secret...
Chapter 3- The Anger
Haylie didn‘t find any good time to talk to her mother about a possible visit to Domino. Musa‘s „bedroom-lockups“ growed to be twice as more than usual. Haylie continued to write letters to her father without sending them. She quitted reminding him of the promise he gave her. She just asked him again and again what he wrote in her mother‘s letter that made her so depressed. Haylie finally managed to ask her mother if she could go to Domino to visit her father. „No.“ Was the answer. Straight and clear.
-why not? Haylie asked after the third no.
-He wrote me a letter, let‘s say that it was not a happy letter. Musa said clear.
-what did he write anyway? Haylie managed to ask.
-you do not need to know. Musa said. Let‘s say it was a secret. She continued
-I really, really want to see my father. Haylie said trying to sound like her mother.
-then you will have to do it alone. Musa said.
-I will, I will! Haylie said.
-and you will see it yourself. Musa wispered to herself.
-I didn‘t hear what you said, can you repeat it? Haylie asked surprised.
-it was nothing. Musa said clear and locked herself in the bedroom.
Haylie decided to send her father a e-mail to tell him that she would come by herself.
[EDIT]: this was quite short...
This post has been edited by dittadulla: Aug 25 2008, 12:29 PM
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Yeah, But actually, You made the story so you know what happened next! Buhahahaha! XD, But it seems to be a very bad secret, Some like you broked up and Riven got a new wife of some sort of..