Interesting start... I prefer the design of the first drawing.
Here are some handy tips- static colours don't really express the forms of the body and clothing, you need to add a contrasting outline and some shadow. Your art will stand out more. Also, wings need a contrasting outline too. And they need to be uniform in size to be effective.
Good luck for the future!
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