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Magix Club's Forum _ Creative Writing _ An Ode To The Man.

Posted by: W.I.N.X Nov 15 2010, 8:54 AM

Well, it's not so much an ode, but this is a haiku I wrote. I dedicate it to all The Men of the world. But what can I say? I was inspired by an ARK I hadn't seen til now. And after I wrote my reply to said ark, made about The Man himself I wrote these.

How I love The Man
All his dog-like tendancies
Man is Donnan? Non.



Or perhaps an acrostic poem?

Tiresome
Helpless(in getting underailed that is)
Ew

Manleh man
Animalistic
Not Donnan.


Cinquain next?
Donnan
He is The Man
He is an animal
Addicted, loves to bite people
The Man

((I slid right by with that one in terms of MCness, I'm telling ya))


Or even a limerick perhaps?

There once was a Man called The Man
Who was not at all like Donnan
He wasn't a pal
But an animal
And was disliked by all but his nan.



Yeaaaahh. Just MAKE it rhyme. It still sounds rightish.
((To be clear. I dislike the characterisation. Not the character by any length. Mofcourse though.))

....You can all go home now. I don't have any more poetry to spout.

Posted by: winxclubrox23 Nov 15 2010, 4:12 PM

*Absolute senseless flailing*

Ohmagod. Ohmagod. I...no words. Your poetry skills blow me away, Kathrun. I think you should send these into a publisher. Holay cow. Brilliance. xD

Posted by: humbu111 Nov 15 2010, 10:18 PM

LOOOL. This is rather lol worthy no lies =P

Posted by: imdepressedxo Nov 16 2010, 2:09 PM

I havent read many haikus in my life but i can say this is really good, as a poetry writer myself =D though i only do wen im feeling sad....=P
If u write a lot of these u should find a website to upload them or something cuz u did a great job XD

Posted by: W.I.N.X Nov 17 2010, 12:15 PM

Heh. I'd be too scared to publish these anywhere else. The lost-puppy woman with the dog-like characters is a stalker and may find them.

Posted by: winxclubrox23 Nov 29 2010, 3:31 AM

I was so inspired by your poetry, Kathrun, I wrote some of my own. A diamante. Because that was not yet covered. xD

Donnan
Boorish, Ignorant
Entertaining, Harassing, Rushing
King, Summer, Dog, Bedroom
Biting, Twisting, Wrestling
Hurried, Abhorrent
The Man






Posted by: W.I.N.X Nov 29 2010, 3:35 AM

...That was fabulous Tea. Simply fabulous. I can't believe the magnitude of your poetry skills. That brought a tear to my eye, it really did.