Bakugarua, this is an adventure on another world Options

[demon]

hello this is my first peace of creative writing. i will appreciate all of your reviews

Prologue

This is a story of a war on another world called Bakugarua that has been going on for centuries. Well until the four great kings created peace, but they knew this peace would be temporary so they created the 4 clans named after them self’s Bone, Blade, Beast, and Element and when the war were to start again they would be reincarnated to stop it. And to make sure nothing happened to those clans they were sent to another planet called earth were the separated until the time came when they would be needed again.

It was 500 years after the war ended when a war was caused by the two dark clans named: Death and Kaosu. And then a beam of light hit the capital of bakugarua and the four descendants were summoned to the great church of Kami, in the country oh Hikari. Were they were trained in magic, swordsmanship, manners, and logics, and how to summon the book of there clan, for the next 6 years they lived at the church, on there18 birthday they were sent out into the world of bakugarua to stop the wars with there mysterious power, and each one with a mystery of a past.

This being the beginning of the crazy adventure of Bruce William, Sky Bloom, Jaclyn pence, Alex Lee. As they were sent out they were separated and tasked with finding there partner, then their real mission will start.

This post has been edited by demon: Aug 1 2010, 1:19 PM