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The Unknown Fairy

Haylie

Haylie was a sixteen years old independent fairy. Her personality fitted with her father, Riven, not very social. She loved instruments though, just like her mother, Musa. Haylie could play her fluote all day long if she could. She didn‘t like friends, but still some girls got hooked to her because they thought that otherwise they would get hurt. Haylie didn‘t make an attempt to scare them away, she just used them to get her some stuff.
Haylie did not mention her father without being asked. She did not feel good about it. After her father left to Domino in order to help Princess Bloom and her parents raising it after the found of them. He had been there since Haylie was three years old. Her mother didn‘t leave with him because of Haylie. Riven had contact for the first three years. Then Musa and Haylie didn‘t hear a single word from him. For a few hours in a row Musa locked the door into her bedroom and cried. Haylie hated to hear that and went outside and played her fluote for hours instead. But sometimes Haylie locked herself in her own bedroom and started to write letters to her father. She stopped sending them on the other hand a while ago since Riven didn‘t ever reply. Instead Haylie collected the letters in a book and kept them.
The only thing Haylie remembered about her father is a sentence he said before he leaved. Haylie knew that she could never, ever forget that sentence. „I promise, my dear Haylie, I promise, I will come back after my job is done.“ Her father said just before his leaving. „you promised.“ Haylie wrote in every letter she wrote. „you promised me“

{BIG EDIT} Chapter rewritten

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- dittadulla   The Unknown Fairy   Jul 19 2008, 10:32 PM
- - MorriganAensland   Well, this is a chapter length I could grunt out i...   Jul 21 2008, 8:06 PM
- - dittadulla   well, I've been thinking it out and in, and I ...   Jul 22 2008, 11:12 PM
- - humbu111   well i liked the first chapter as long as u add mo...   Jul 22 2008, 11:24 PM
- - dittadulla   I'm gonna re write the first chapter, but not ...   Jul 24 2008, 11:02 AM
- - humbu111   ok, I hope u do it soon ^_^   Jul 24 2008, 4:31 PM
- - winxclub-joy   wow, I wanna to see an update soon!   Jul 26 2008, 7:48 AM
- - dittadulla   I will be working on it^^   Jul 30 2008, 11:52 AM
- - humbu111   ok, cool!   Jul 30 2008, 3:43 PM
- - W.I.N.X   Great story. Oh BTW I always use the name Hayli...   Jul 31 2008, 6:53 AM
- - dittadulla   you do? o.O well I wasn't copying you either^^   Jul 31 2008, 1:09 PM
- - W.I.N.X   I know. I just wanted you to know so there'd ...   Aug 1 2008, 7:19 AM
- - dittadulla   thank you^^ that is a nice thought   Aug 1 2008, 2:30 PM
- - humbu111   i cant wait...!   Aug 1 2008, 7:03 PM
- - dittadulla   be patient =)   Aug 2 2008, 10:55 AM
- - humbu111   lol okay, any estimate when it'll be ready?   Aug 2 2008, 5:35 PM
- - dittadulla   hmm... soon enaugh =)   Aug 3 2008, 12:56 PM
- - humbu111   ok im waiting   Aug 3 2008, 6:07 PM
- - dittadulla   good to know you're interested^_^   Aug 3 2008, 9:03 PM
- - humbu111   yep, I am are u gonna do short chapters again? cos...   Aug 3 2008, 9:56 PM
- - dittadulla   chapter rewritten^^   Aug 19 2008, 10:20 PM
- - humbu111   Cool. Its so said...   Aug 19 2008, 10:29 PM
- - dittadulla   yeah :') I was planning to make next chapter e...   Aug 20 2008, 12:10 PM
- - dittadulla   Chapter 2- The Letter Haylie was writing a letter...   Aug 20 2008, 8:46 PM
- - humbu111   Nice, its getting interesting! Cant wait for t...   Aug 20 2008, 9:18 PM
- - dittadulla   I can post a tiny sneek peek... the next chapter i...   Aug 20 2008, 9:42 PM
- - humbu111   Cool, cant wait ^^   Aug 20 2008, 9:46 PM
- - dittadulla   I'll post it when some other members post...   Aug 23 2008, 8:32 PM
- - humbu111   What do u mean? As in u want more of an audience?   Aug 23 2008, 8:36 PM
- - dittadulla   excatly (xD look at my english xD)   Aug 23 2008, 9:26 PM
- - humbu111   Lol how do you plan on getting more people here?   Aug 23 2008, 9:38 PM
- - dittadulla   I don't know xD one step is a link in my sig^^   Aug 23 2008, 10:16 PM
- - humbu111   lol, u could try pm-ing people too. Good luck ^_^   Aug 23 2008, 10:18 PM
- - dittadulla   maybe... you can also help me^-^   Aug 23 2008, 10:43 PM
- - W.I.N.X   Very good. More!   Aug 25 2008, 6:39 AM
- - Winx_cutie189   Yep! I'm so excited of the third chapter...   Aug 25 2008, 9:15 AM
- - dittadulla   ooo... you won't get the secret yet... but Mus...   Aug 25 2008, 12:27 PM
- - Winx_cutie189   Please post the next chapter!!! XD   Aug 25 2008, 1:01 PM
- - dittadulla   there is a secret... probably a bad secret... Rive...   Aug 25 2008, 1:08 PM
- - Winx_cutie189   Yeah, But actually, You made the story so you know...   Aug 25 2008, 1:29 PM
- - dittadulla   shh... you are telling me the secret. oh, this is ...   Aug 25 2008, 1:43 PM
- - humbu111   lol this is good. do u have enough audience now? i...   Aug 25 2008, 9:02 PM
- - dittadulla   that is enaugh audience... o.O   Aug 26 2008, 6:37 PM
- - humbu111   Ok, cool, cant wait for the next chapter   Aug 26 2008, 7:23 PM
- - dittadulla   me neither o.O   Aug 26 2008, 9:40 PM
- - W.I.N.X   Momomomooooooooooooooooooree!!!!...   Aug 27 2008, 10:53 AM
- - dittadulla   that made the difference EDIT: typo~ -.-   Aug 27 2008, 4:30 PM
- - bloomskylove   new reader!!! that was soooooooo good ...   Aug 27 2008, 7:43 PM
- - dittadulla   okay, I will so work on it! ^-^   Aug 27 2008, 8:05 PM
- - Tecna 01   new reader here.   Aug 29 2008, 5:34 PM
- - dittadulla   don't rush o.O I am working on it, it's ha...   Aug 29 2008, 7:10 PM
- - dittadulla   Chapter 4- The Special E-mail Haylie waited for a...   Sep 6 2008, 3:29 PM
- - Tecna 01   good. I really want to know the secret.   Sep 7 2008, 12:07 PM
- - dittadulla   I do too o.O   Sep 7 2008, 12:24 PM
- - Winx_cutie189   Ha ha ha, Whatever that unbearable secret is, Hmmm...   Sep 13 2008, 12:59 AM
- - dittadulla   that is what it seems, yes... '^^   Sep 13 2008, 9:42 AM
- - humbu111   Its really good! Please post the next chapter ...   Sep 13 2008, 4:22 PM
- - dittadulla   I will post soon^^   Sep 13 2008, 7:00 PM
- - humbu111   Yay! Cant wait!   Sep 14 2008, 12:40 AM
- - winxclub-joy   hope to see more!~   Sep 14 2008, 5:31 AM
- - rano0oma   oh come on....come on hurry up!!!   Nov 16 2009, 11:12 AM


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