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post Oct 21 2011, 9:22 PM
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"Hey how dare you punch me" turb shouted getting really angry "how dare me you started it by calling me an hold hag" zoey yelled at him trying to kick him where no boy would not want to get hit but instead ended up hitting the wall with such force "that sould keep her from doing anymore damage" said sardon putting his fan away

Cafe mew mew

Elliot was just explaning what had happend before he got there to mark

"Where the hell is zoey!" Screamed mark wanting to know why dren took her

"Elliot come here we found zoeys pendant near the brige" called corina "we might be able to find her then we can look inside it to see if there is anything" said elliot calmly

On top off a roof.

"Well good going sardon you knocked out zoey tarbs got a bleeding lip this is your fualt" dren said to sardon because he didn't want the blame

"My fualt this was your stupid idea from that stupid little brain off yours thinking you know more then all of us but you don't!" sardon practically yelled at dren tarb was just watcching the two fight he walked off and flew of the building to somewhere he didn't think off going kiki`s house

Kiki`s house

Kiki was just coming out of the bathroom when she saw tarb "tarb tarb tarb tarb" kiki yelled with excitment and pulled the boy inside her room hugging him so he could barley breath

And again I will try and finish it of soon and sorry if its confusing



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post Oct 22 2011, 8:47 PM
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'Kay... I can forgive that.
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- princess bloom of earth   its a desteny part two   Oct 21 2011, 9:22 PM
- - P-girl   .... I'd rather have you finish it off with pr...   Oct 22 2011, 9:57 AM
- - princess bloom of earth   Ok I'm really sorry about the punctution gramm...   Oct 22 2011, 4:56 PM
- - P-girl   It's the commas and dots you use. As well as p...   Oct 22 2011, 6:12 PM
- - princess bloom of earth   Ok I get them but capital letters will be a probla...   Oct 22 2011, 8:42 PM
- - P-girl   'Kay... I can forgive that.   Oct 22 2011, 8:47 PM
- - princess bloom of earth   Ok   Oct 23 2011, 6:48 AM
- - Another Morning   Another word of advice would be to just use one to...   Oct 24 2011, 2:27 PM
- - princess bloom of earth   I know but the problam is tha I know but the prob...   Oct 24 2011, 7:42 PM
- - Another Morning   Hmm...P-girl said she could help, I believe? And I...   Oct 24 2011, 10:27 PM
- - princess bloom of earth   Ok but how are you sopposed to help me   Oct 25 2011, 5:29 PM
- - P-girl   Beta-Reading. I.E. fixing your grammar/spelling/pu...   Oct 25 2011, 5:32 PM
- - princess bloom of earth   Uh what   Oct 25 2011, 7:33 PM
- - P-girl   You send your story to me, I'll fix the mistak...   Oct 25 2011, 7:37 PM
- - princess bloom of earth   Yea but how do I send it to u   Oct 25 2011, 7:41 PM
- - P-girl   You.... use the private message system?   Oct 25 2011, 7:51 PM
- - princess bloom of earth   Ok but won't I have to write it all to you fir...   Oct 25 2011, 8:06 PM
- - P-girl   Yes. Then I'll fix the mistakes, send it back,...   Oct 25 2011, 8:09 PM
- - Another Morning   I haven't watched it in a while, and I mostly ...   Oct 25 2011, 10:36 PM
- - princess bloom of earth   Oh ok that sounds easy   Oct 26 2011, 6:06 PM


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